{"id":9282,"date":"2021-06-11T13:24:05","date_gmt":"2021-06-11T16:24:05","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.ericjorden.com\/blog\/?p=9282"},"modified":"2021-06-11T15:10:43","modified_gmt":"2021-06-11T18:10:43","slug":"the-nightmare-of-a-late-commission-a-tight-deadline-and-writing-an-experts-report-in-plain-english","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"http:\/\/www.ericjorden.com\/blog\/2021\/06\/11\/the-nightmare-of-a-late-commission-a-tight-deadline-and-writing-an-experts-report-in-plain-english\/","title":{"rendered":"The nightmare of a late commission, a tight deadline, and writing an expert&#8217;s report in plain-English"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>I was surprised at how difficult it is to write a forensic report in plain-English for non-technical readers.  It&#8217;s easy in technical-English but not so much in plain-English.  Translating a foreign language &#8211; from technical to plain &#8211; is difficult.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Writing in technical-English just sails along because you&#8217;re reporting a thorough and objective investigation using words suited to the task, and there&#8217;s lots of  guidance (Refs 1, 2 and 3):  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol><li>You identify each task &#8211; and many of these are standard tasks carried out in all forensic engineering investigations, including those when you follow-the-evidence,<\/li><li>Describe the task, <\/li><li>State why you did it, <\/li><li>The data you got, <\/li><li>Your analysis of the data, <\/li><li>The light it shed on the cause of the failure or accident, <\/li><li>Note how the findings of each task support, or otherwise, the findings on cause of other tasks, and, <\/li><li>Finally, how the findings support your evolving hypothesis as to cause.<\/li><\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p>The investigation goes deep inside as you do your work.  And then comes out easily when you sit down to write your report.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>It&#8217;s easy to write technically because you&#8217;ve lived your investigation for days or weeks, and you&#8217;re writing for kindred souls, other technical people, in words that roll off your tongue.  But, putting it in jargon-free, plain-English is another story.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>A tight deadline makes writing in plain-English even more difficult.  Like, you were retained months or years after the failure or accident, and the deadline is just around the corner.  Nor when you get mini-briefings from your client as you write.  The mini-data is good but it&#8217;s got to be analysed, checked against other data and included in the report &#8211; in plain-English.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I had all three during a forensic investigation a few months ago &#8211; <span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-cyan-blue-color\">late commission, tight deadline <\/span><span class=\"has-inline-color has-black-color\">and<\/span><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-cyan-blue-color\"> mini-briefings<\/span>.  I also had non-technical readers so I decided to write in <span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-cyan-blue-color\">plain-English<\/span>.  That&#8217;s four.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I was reviewing my report weeks later after submitting it in preparation for trial and saw the odd phrase and word that I might have restated.  No change in opinion just that the wording might be tweaked.  I thought afterwards that I must write for the technical reader in late\/early situations like this.  Never mind plain-English.  Too risky.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I also thought that all forensic reports should be written then put aside for a while and read again later before submitting.  That&#8217;s how I draft my blogs, over a period of a good many days, or sometimes several weeks.  It&#8217;s worked   for blogging for nine years.  It should work for forensic reports. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Forensic reports in plain-English for non-technical readers is a challenge for the writer but good for the client when you&#8217;re retained early and the deadline is way down the road.  It&#8217;s bad, <span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-red-color\">a nightmare<\/span>, when the deadline is just around the corner.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I will continue to write my reports in plain-English but I&#8217;m alert to the difficulty &#8211; learned during the last few forensic reports I&#8217;ve written.  One of these was submitted as a preliminary report because the deadline was so tight.  I&#8217;ll write in plain-English because I enjoy reporting to the interface between engineering and other professions.  This is also the reason I enjoy blogging on the nature and methods of forensic engineering investigation.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong> References<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<ol><li>Mangraviti, Jr., James J., Babitsky. Steven and Donovan, Nadine Nasser.  <strong><em>How to Write an Expert Witness Report<\/em><\/strong>, 2nd ed., 2014, SEAK, Inc., Falmouth, MA   (A massive 560 page, 1.25&#8243; thick, 8.5&#8243; x 11&#8243; tomb)<\/li><li>Zinsser, William K., <strong><em>On Writing Well<\/em><\/strong>, 7th ed., 2006, Harper Collins Publishers, New York  (The best on the market for writing non-fiction.  Note that it went to seven editions before the author died and sold 1.5 million copies)<\/li><li><strong><em>Nova Scotia Civil Procedure Rule 55 Governing Experts<\/em><\/strong>, 2010, and similar rules and codes elsewhere in the country  (Hard-nosed guidance to ensure the expert reports all reasoning, including that possibly leading to a different opinion) <\/li><\/ol>\n\n\n\n<p> <em>(Posted by Eric E. Jorden, M.Sc., P.Eng. Consulting Professional Engineer, Forensic Engineer, Geotechnology Ltd., Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada June 11, 2021 <strong><span class=\"has-inline-color has-vivid-red-color\">ejorden@eastlink.ca<\/span><\/strong>)&nbsp; &nbsp;<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I was surprised at how difficult it is to write a forensic report in plain-English for non-technical readers. It&#8217;s easy in technical-English but not so much in plain-English. 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